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Postby Celtic » 04/23/2008 5:06 PM

...Yes...Only a slight problem, I typed it up at school, so you'll see this post edited tomorrow at the latest!

EDIT: I haven't finished it all the way...But I have the Brunt of it!

Name:  Scorpio

Story:

He smiled as his master; Lord Voldemort and Lord Tromedlove, took him
into the interrogation chamber. This was always fun! But, it was
unusual that they fed him his breakfast, carrion, before they let him
in to torture the uncomplying in the interrogation. Maybe it was a
special case where he didn't need to eat anything.

Indeed, a special case it was. Scorpio flew out of the room, his
pleasure was fuffilled with the sufficient torture session. His white
feathers where tainted with hints of blood but his beak was pure red,
which was why he was hurring away. No matter how he loved torture he
hated getting himself dirty. Quickly he cleaned every hint of blood
off of himself so his feathers gleamed.

Lord Tromedlove had a son?!?!?!?! His mind screamed, for he was having
trouble processing this. Apparently, they never talked, but the Lord
had just said that he was coming to visit.The corbine was in a flurry,
he needed to be notified. Knock, knock, one of the master's were
kncocking on the door. Scorpio quickly calmed himself, before his
master, turned out to be Master Tromedlove, came in and grabbed him
none to gentley into the great hall.

The corbine stared at the lucain that was Lord Tromedlove's son. His
name was Lord Iridescent, and he seemed to hate the two masters of the
house but he seemed kind.
"Who is this?", Lord Iridescent asked Lord Voldemort, not a hint of
respect in his voice. Scorpio had now been seated at his respectable
position, on his Lord's shoulder. "That is Scorpio", Voldemort said
coldly to Lord Iridescent, "He will show you your room", Scorpio
nodded slightly before going timidly to Lord Iridescent's back,
guiding him slowly to his rooms.

To his surprise, Scorpio was not yelled at or even scolded once for
accidently turning in the wrong direction. This was all so new to him,
kindness was not known ever. So Scorpio nearly went frantic when
Iridescent smiled at him!

The majestic lucain strode inside the room; checking it over before he
invited Scorpio in.  The marrow corbine went in not knowing how to say
no.  Scorpio flew in awkwardly, and over time the two grew closer
together; until the awful time came when Scorpio accidently disobeyed
Lord Voldemort.

"Scorpio! Come here, you idiot of a bird", Lord Voldemort's angry voice boomed throughout the crickity house. The mechanical bird slowly flew from Lord Iridescents room to Lord Voldemort's chamber.  Lord Iridescent came quickly with his father by his side; Iridescent didn't seem to happy with either of them. "Scorpio, how many times have I called you?" Voldemorts sickly honey sweet voice asked falsly, "Hmm?" SCorpio shuddered and nodded his head twice. "Yes, two times! I suggest you know that you should have come teh first time!" His voice grew less false and Nagini slithered in, hearing his masters angry voice rise at Scorpio.  SCorpio fearfully eyed the snake, and nodded.  Then, Lord Voldemort, as fast as his snake his hand struck Scorpio-sending his mechanics into a fritz.

Lord Iridescent crouched down next to Scorpio before picking up the dazed machine and standingup ragally saying, "Good Bye" His eyes were cold as ice and Lord Iridescent walked out, Carefully not dropping a piece that broke off.





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Postby Matt » 04/24/2008 2:39 PM

Ok. Fireheart, is yours done yet? @-@




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Postby Matt » 04/25/2008 9:49 PM

That's great Celtic! 8D -loves it- <3 Scorpioooo~ Anyways, the contest ends in 5 days people!! ~<3




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Postby SpringsSong » 04/26/2008 1:02 AM

PimaBean wrote:Ok. Fireheart, is yours done yet? @-@


It's comin, it's comin.  Gotta, like.. READ the whole frigging harry Potter series again... T^T
Maybe I'm foolish, maybe I'm blind
Thinking I can see through this to see what's behind
Got no way to prove it, so maybe I'm lying
Take a look in the mirror, what do you see
Can you see it clearer, or are you deceived in what you believe?
Don't ask my opinion, don't ask me to lie
Then beg for forgiveness for making you cry
'cause I'm no prophet or Messiah
You should go looking somewhere higher

I'm only human, I make mistakes
I'm only human, I do what I can
I'm only human, that's all it takes to put the blame on me

Don't put the blame on me

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Postby Matt » 04/26/2008 12:12 PM

XDDD Ok. Take your time~




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Postby SpringsSong » 04/28/2008 12:45 PM

There, done.  ^^
Maybe I'm foolish, maybe I'm blind
Thinking I can see through this to see what's behind
Got no way to prove it, so maybe I'm lying
Take a look in the mirror, what do you see
Can you see it clearer, or are you deceived in what you believe?
Don't ask my opinion, don't ask me to lie
Then beg for forgiveness for making you cry
'cause I'm no prophet or Messiah
You should go looking somewhere higher

I'm only human, I make mistakes
I'm only human, I do what I can
I'm only human, that's all it takes to put the blame on me

Don't put the blame on me

"Human", Rag'n'Bone Man

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Postby Matt » 04/28/2008 1:15 PM

......

Wow.

.....

Just. Wow. o.o That's by far the most awesome-est, EVER. 8DDDDD

A.k.a = (your probly' gonna' win. o.o)




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Postby SpringsSong » 04/28/2008 1:28 PM

oO;

Erm... wow?

I typed that up in... thirty minutes?  Calling up solely knowledge from Books 1 and 5? xD
Maybe I'm foolish, maybe I'm blind
Thinking I can see through this to see what's behind
Got no way to prove it, so maybe I'm lying
Take a look in the mirror, what do you see
Can you see it clearer, or are you deceived in what you believe?
Don't ask my opinion, don't ask me to lie
Then beg for forgiveness for making you cry
'cause I'm no prophet or Messiah
You should go looking somewhere higher

I'm only human, I make mistakes
I'm only human, I do what I can
I'm only human, that's all it takes to put the blame on me

Don't put the blame on me

"Human", Rag'n'Bone Man

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Postby Celtic » 04/28/2008 1:32 PM

Awwww....-goes to finish up hers so she has a chance actually-

=P

EDIT: My eggs are hatching! (Ish excited lol)





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Postby Matt » 04/28/2008 6:03 PM

Wow. o.o That's a sad ending, Celtie. ;-; -spazzes- o3o




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Postby Celtic » 04/28/2008 8:58 PM

Yes-but hey, I like it..





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Postby J'Tal » 04/29/2008 2:20 AM

Ha! Finished before the deadline! Sorry it took so long, I didn't have any ideas until now. I hope you enjoy my interpretation of your guide lines. Let me know!
You see things that are and ask "Why?"
I dream of things that never were and ask "Why not?"
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Postby Matt » 04/29/2008 5:07 PM

Good story, J'Tal. c: Get your stories in! Only 2 more days! >D

If your story is not in by noon on May 1st, you are disqualified!




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Postby robopup24 » 04/29/2008 5:21 PM

I shall enter then X3;;;
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Postby Matt » 04/29/2008 5:39 PM

OwO The Robo hath entered! ~<3 Splee!




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