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Terrace park (Open to all who know sentence structure)

Postby Draco » 02/09/2009 8:08 PM

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Kyune wandered through the park, looking for something to do. Life was so boring sometimes. He watched the other creatures around him, many in groups. Sometimes he just wanted a friend, but those thoughts were immediately eradicated due to his solitary nature.
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Re: Terrace park (Open to all who know sentence structure)

Postby Draco » 02/09/2009 10:27 PM

Kyune laid down in the shade of a large tree, yawning widely. He was feeling pretty tired, add that to his boredom and he would be asleep in a few seconds.
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Re: Terrace park (Open to all who know sentence structure)

Postby Ancientmew2 » 02/13/2009 12:22 PM

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Koyune walked around the park. "What beautiful scenery!" she thought. She looked down at her paws, to watch the markings glow. As she walked through over to a tree, with a fellox lying under it, other creatures backed away.

"Hi. Mind if I lie here?" asked Koyune to the Glacial Fellox.
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Re: Terrace park (Open to all who know sentence structure)

Postby Draco » 02/13/2009 5:12 PM

"Don't mind at all, been waiting for someone to show up." Kyune replied, lifting his head to look at the temple fellox. Some were afraid of temple creatures, though he wasn't in the least. They were just misunderstood for the most part.
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Re: Terrace park (Open to all who know sentence structure)

Postby Ancientmew2 » 02/14/2009 3:52 AM

"Thanks!" said Koyune as she lied down beside the other Fellox. "My name is Koyune, im a girl, and i've come here because most creatures are nice, but I've found out that their scared of me. Im only a Temple Fellox."
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Re: Terrace park (Open to all who know sentence structure)

Postby Draco » 02/14/2009 3:59 AM

"Know what you mean, they see a little spectral ice fire and they go all crazy." Kyune replied, looking over his new companion with slightly tired eyes. It had been long day getting here, since he had not rested. "So, are you traveling alone?"

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Re: Terrace park (Open to all who know sentence structure)

Postby Ancientmew2 » 02/14/2009 4:26 AM

"Yeah. I have other temple friends, but they have gone different areas." said Koyune. "Its valetines day, and I have nothing to do. Do you want a Heart Cookie? I'll go and get you one if you want. I'm going now."
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Postby Draco » 02/14/2009 4:31 AM

"Valentines day and Friday the thirteenth back to back, what a week." Kyune said. He got up, saying "Ok, lets go." He then added "I am Kyune, by the way."
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Re: Terrace park (Open to all who know sentence structure)

Postby Ancientmew2 » 02/14/2009 4:39 AM

"I know. Yesterday, I got beat up by the Scaleo Gang. You know, the evil gang that wonders this place?!" said Koyune.

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"Unlucky day for me. Anyway, lets go to the cafe. Im hungry" said Koyune. "By the way, you have a nice name." she said to the Fellox, hoping that he will follow her to the cafe.
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Postby Draco » 02/14/2009 4:46 AM

"Oh yea, they don't like to mess with me for some reason." Kyune said, going towards the resteraunts. He entered the store, Koyune beside him.

((5/5))
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Re: Terrace park (Open to all who know sentence structure)

Postby Ancientmew2 » 02/14/2009 5:23 AM

"Why hello young valetines! What do you want today?!" said the shop keeper. "We are not valetines. Anyway, could I have a heart cookie, please? What do you want Kyune?" said Koyune
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Postby Draco » 02/14/2009 12:25 PM

"How about an expresso? I need some help to stay awake." Kyune said, pulling out some ks.

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Re: Terrace park (Open to all who know sentence structure)

Postby Ancientmew2 » 02/15/2009 3:21 AM

"ok. Also, could I have a Hot Choco, im freezing!" said Koyune. "Well, ok! Here you go, one expresso, one hot choco, and one heart cookie. Thats 15 ks." said the Shop Keeper. "There you go!" said Koyune as she handed the shop keeper the money, followed by Kyune.

"Come lets sit down." said Koyune as she gathered the food a placed them on a table. "So, what brings you here?" said Koyune, sitting down and bitting into the cookie.
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Re: Terrace park (Open to all who know sentence structure)

Postby Draco » 02/15/2009 3:53 AM

((Uh, how are they sitting at a table? This isn't anthro... though I guess it could be))

Kyune sat down across from her, drinking the expresso. His face was slightly tinted red at how much this looked like a date.

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Re: Terrace park (Open to all who know sentence structure)

Postby Ancientmew2 » 02/15/2009 4:00 AM

"hehe you've gone red! I must say, Im the only temple creature that has emotions hehe, I wish I could be another colour, do you know a way how I could change?" said Koyune.
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