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Interested?

Yes
9
45%
In the lineart yes-Use a different colouring design
6
30%
In neither
5
25%
 
Total votes : 20

Opinions?

Postby kabuto_rocks » 09/14/2008 6:22 AM

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I bought a piece of lineart off Wajas and I came up with this little fellow while I was toying around with it. I was wondering if anyone would be interested in it if I made it into an adoptable? They would be little ghostly dogs if they were created, kinda like spirit guides ^_^ Feel free to post your comments as I'm very interested in what people think of them (Oh, and the background's transparent by the way)

P.S If you see a weird line under the drawing then refresh the page. I made a slight mistake while uploading
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Postby kabuto_rocks » 09/15/2008 12:13 PM

It seems the general answer is Yes, but no by much. I'll leave it open a few more days before deciding (some comments might be useful *hint hint*)
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Postby xLavenderKisses » 09/15/2008 12:21 PM

*takes hint*
I personally don't like the muzzle.
It looks kinda roundish, the top of it.
I don't reaslly like the head either.
It's kinda flat  .____.
Otherwise it's pretty good.
I like ghost idea.
Btw, I voted Yes.

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Postby kabuto_rocks » 09/15/2008 12:41 PM

Thanks for helping me out :) I see what you mean about the head...I could try to fix it slightly but my art skills might fail X_X
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Postby Wyndhail » 09/17/2008 5:09 PM

There ARE minor anatomical errors, as Lavender said, but overall I like 'em. I'd want one. :B
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Postby clackno1 » 09/17/2008 6:02 PM

I like it, I voted yes, same thing about the head, and to me, the tail is a bit short and puffy, but it's pretty cool, I'll take one, if you make them into an adoptable that is.

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Postby Essence » 09/17/2008 7:27 PM

Like Lavender mentioned, the nose seems to be a bit to curved at the top, you know? The face seems to be a bit shaky.

But overall, I'd want one. :3
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Postby ToxicShadow » 09/17/2008 7:53 PM

Everyone has pretty much covered the anatomy, but I also wanted to say that, while the anatomy may not be perfect compared to real life animals, it's an adoptable. x3 Honestly, I think it's just fine as it because its a. the art style b. not a dog, but another "made-creature" c. made up creatures can naturally have unusual anatomy~
It's cute, it really is, and that short poofy tail is adorable, same with their ears. I want to play with them for some reason. ^ ^;;
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Postby Juniperstar45 » 09/17/2008 11:56 PM

I agree with everyone, some slight errors but overall I would get one ^_^
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Postby kabuto_rocks » 09/18/2008 11:30 AM

Wow, lots of comments XD It seems that people like them so I will create a thread for them later tonight. Thanks for the comments you guys/girls, you've really helped ^_^
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