[Why do we die?](So you can live!) [Why do we strive?] (So you can win! But why did you defy every truthful word I recommend?) [My question back, why do you recommend an ode temptation]
(So I can test your patience and tolerance in the face of sin) [But why attest when you hold all the answers to the state we in? (For you to bear witness of imperfections of mortal men) [So it's a lesson?] (And a blessing Journey back to where you been 'Cause before the tree can flourish seeds must first be planted in)
8.5 - The green, although it matches the Albie's eyes, doesn't really seem to fit. I would go with gray or black, personally. Otherwise, neat and organized ^^
[Why do we die?](So you can live!) [Why do we strive?] (So you can win! But why did you defy every truthful word I recommend?) [My question back, why do you recommend an ode temptation]
(So I can test your patience and tolerance in the face of sin) [But why attest when you hold all the answers to the state we in? (For you to bear witness of imperfections of mortal men) [So it's a lesson?] (And a blessing Journey back to where you been 'Cause before the tree can flourish seeds must first be planted in)
7.5/10 Simple and neat. But, it could use something to spiff it out. It's a little boring to look at it as it is now. D;
she said one day to leave her, sand up to her shoulders waiting for the tide to drag her to the ocean, to another sea's shore. this thing hurts like hell, but what did you expect?
and all you can hear is the sound of your own heart and all you can feel is your lungs flood and the blood course but oh I can see five hundred years dead set ahead of me, five hundred behind, a thousand years in perfect symmetry...
Love the Yin-yang thing going on, and the hands are a nice touch along with the use of lucain. But it looks as if something's missing. The signature technically only has one part to it. I think it would look better if it have a few equal parts.
OnedaymenwilllookbackandsayIgavebirthtothetwentiethcentury. Jack the Ripper