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Postby SpringsSong » 05/06/2008 4:15 PM

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Name: ???
Gender: Female
Species: Seraph/Angel Sahound

So, y'see this little girlie here?  She's the sister of my vampire hunter, Angelo, but she's currently sitting here, begging for my dead muse to give her purpose.  Hah.  My muse is dead.  So, what I need is a little help here.  This girl here was raised to kill, like her brother, only she never untrained herself.  Her dilemma: she has a crush on an Autumn Kuhna--but she was trained to kill Kuhnas, and she therefore is afraid to get near little Kytari for fear she will kill him.  So, she needs a name and a backstory and more of a personality.

Why should I help you, you ask?  Well...

Prizes!

-Lucain pup bred from one of my three customs
OR
-A Kuhna kit of your choice from my Elder's next litter
-500,000 WC
-Age Pear
-Love Pear
-Plastic Waja

Entrants:
-Banister
-celticdragon135
-SweetDisaster
-PimaBean
-robopup24
-silverleaf728
-AmberGlaze
-suiseisekilove30

So... Go ahead and get those creative minds workin--Wait!

Rules!!!!!
-You must incorporate being raised to kill Kuhnas into her story.
-You must incorporate Kytari, the Autumn Kuhna, into her story.
-You must make some reference to her brother, as she is very attached to him.

NOW you may get those creative minds workin'.

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Got no way to prove it, so maybe I'm lying
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Don't ask my opinion, don't ask me to lie
Then beg for forgiveness for making you cry
'cause I'm no prophet or Messiah
You should go looking somewhere higher

I'm only human, I make mistakes
I'm only human, I do what I can
I'm only human, that's all it takes to put the blame on me

Don't put the blame on me

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Postby Banister » 05/06/2008 4:19 PM

Oooohhhh. o3o
Killah puppeh. I find this vedy interesting.
You can count me in. c=
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I'll edit with my story in a bit.
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Postby Celtic » 05/06/2008 4:45 PM

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Postby SweetDisaster » 05/06/2008 5:01 PM

Name: Versi—means something in Italian, but I forgot what. O_O;;

Personality: Generally, Versi is in control of her emotions—overly so. Appearing almost "robotic"to some people, Versi doesn't usually let her emotions overtake her, or guide her actions—she wasn't trained that way. Unknown, however, to Versi, there is a kind of computer "chip"that was implanted through a tetanus shot into her body. By now, it has been thought to have died, but it seems this isn't true—at least, not all the time. At random times, normally in the presence of a Kuhna, the spark of electricity still inside of it awakens. In these times, Versi cannot control her actions or her mind; all that she knows is that she must kill the nearest Kuhna to be rid of the bloodlust that possesses her. This has been generally put down to the fact that she never really untrained herself.

After these insane moments, which range from a minute to well over an hour, Versi's emotions finally show through—she becomes that frail, sweet, scared little girl that she always is inside, but is afraid to show. It's in these times that Versi becomes most vulnerable. Her little "weak"stages last for a maximum of five minutes—or at least, so far, that's as long as they've lasted. In these, Versi simply...collapses, and needs comfort. Normally, Angelo, her brother, is the only one that can comfort her back to sanity.

The worst of her bloodlusts is that Versi can remember what she does, and when she recalls it, her memory is twisted by the computer chip, to make her think she enjoys murdering Kuhnas. Sometimes driven mad with grief, the only emotion that Versi really shows is despair—she can become moody for days. Normally, though, she makes a dependable, if a bit lackluster, companion...although you would do well not to mention "Kuhna"near her.

History: Versi, as a pup, grew up alongside Angelo, as normal as a Seraph Sahound could get—gentle, loving, bubbly, and full of life—even though the twosome had no real home, roaming around on the streets. Versi loved the freedom, even though she sometimes went to sleep hungry, and the only warmth she could get was her body warmth, and that of Angelo. One day, while she was lingering over a gold fountain on which a Kuhna was poised, spewing water onto the dusty ground, Angelo went ahead to find some more food.

In those days, a group of people that wanted to bring an end to the Lucain and Kuhnas were active. They didn't like the fact that these pets seemed to be worth so much more than others, and wanted to rid Evelon of them. They achieved this by kidnapping pets and assigning them either to Lucain or Kuhnas. They would be trained to kill the species, and then set out to Evelon. One such person, a young woman, was lurking, watching Versi as the young Sahound played with the fountain.

At the opportune moment, Versi was seized from behind. Weak from malnutrition and too bewildered to fight, Versi had no chance. A bag was thrust over her head and her limbs bound, and then Versi was aware only of motion...nothing was stable in her world anymore, and worst of all, Angelo was gone. If he ever returned to the fountain in search of his missing sister, Versi never knew.

She was taken to the headquarters, and assigned to Kuhnas on the grounds that she was too small to be able to properly fight Lucain. And thus began her training. For the first few weeks, the same young woman that had kidnapped her visited the room in which Versi had been put, feeding her well—on both food and tidbits of information, that became invaluable in her training. Versi was told that Kuhnas were secretly plotting to overthrow the other pets, that Versi was now part of a secret group of members that were trying to counter the Kuhnas without using authority figures—since, Versi thought, Kuhnas had corrupted them—and Kuhnas had killed her family, it was because of Kuhnas that she had been thrust into a life of horror. She also was told that the young woman had saved her from a malicious Kuhna lurking nearby.

Too na?Øve to realize that it was a pack of lies, Versi ate it up. In time, on the proper diet, she grew strong‚Äîstrong enough to fight. She was trained to fight. All she ever knew escaped her mind‚Äînow she knew only one purpose‚Äîto fight and to kill Kuhnas. Soon Versi became elite at fighting and killing soundlessly‚Äîbut one thing was wrong. Versi was too soft-hearted to cruelly kill anybody, even a Kuhna, the enemy‚Äîsimply because she had been told by her brother, which she still clung to the memory of, that even the worst enemy had innocent people that were clumped with them‚Äîand even in the best-fought war, people who had nothing to do with warfare died.

So, the young woman that Versi never knew the name of, yet trusted beyond anybody save Angelo, took her to a lab. She was told that she was going to get a shot, to prevent any infection from getting to her. Instead, she was injected by a shot that sent a microscopic computer chip into her bloodstream, which wriggled into her brain and lodged there—the chip would make her yearn to kill a Kuhna anytime she saw one. And then Versi was turned back out to Evelon.

The only time she ever doubted the headquarters was when she bumped into Angelo again. Hadn't she been told, after all, that he had died? Dismissing it, Versi was happy to go and live with him in the place he'd found, and there she thrived. She wasn't sure what had happened to him, and didn't question it—she was too excited to be with him again. To her horror, Versi found she could no longer show her emotions as...earnestly...as before; the long hours of training had shrunk them and replaced them with physical strength, instead.

For a while, Versi was afraid to go outdoors. Being reunited with her brother had sparked a rebellion inside of her. She didn't want to fight and kill anymore; she just wanted a quiet life with Angelo. The first Kuhna she met when she went outside died at her paws. Mortified, terrified by her lack of control, unable to explain it, Versi fled towards the pen in which Angelo must be. Instead, blinded by tears, she ran into Kytari, an Autumn Kuhna.

To her surprise, she again went into the bloodlust, but Kytari managed to calm her down without getting hurt. The bloodlust that had possessed her in Kytari's presence lasted only a few minutes, and then Versi lost control of her emotions, which swelled out of her. She collapsed against Kytari, and cried. The emotion that had exploded from her was what ultimately destroyed the main function of the computer chip—but not entirely.

Still afraid of hurting Kytari, whom Versi felt she owed so much to, she began to avoid him. Angelo had encouraged her to meet with Kuhnas, hoping the continued contact would break Versi of her bloodlust. Versi rejected these ideas—unknowing that she had already broken out of the bloodlust—mostly. No longer would the sight of a Kuhna trigger it. The computer chip had only a spark of electricity left, and the spark activated at random.

But still, Versi cannot face up to Kytari...after all, how could she ever live up to the guilt of killing one of the only creatures she ever loved?
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Postby SpringsSong » 05/06/2008 5:04 PM

Awesome. o3o *was not expecting so much attention so fast*
Maybe I'm foolish, maybe I'm blind
Thinking I can see through this to see what's behind
Got no way to prove it, so maybe I'm lying
Take a look in the mirror, what do you see
Can you see it clearer, or are you deceived in what you believe?
Don't ask my opinion, don't ask me to lie
Then beg for forgiveness for making you cry
'cause I'm no prophet or Messiah
You should go looking somewhere higher

I'm only human, I make mistakes
I'm only human, I do what I can
I'm only human, that's all it takes to put the blame on me

Don't put the blame on me

"Human", Rag'n'Bone Man

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Postby Matt » 05/06/2008 5:15 PM

I'll try an' slip somethin' in. c:
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Postby robopup24 » 05/06/2008 6:28 PM

I'll join X3;;

ENTRYName: Enna
Personality:
History: They say history repeats itself. Over and over again, like a circle. Always, the ugly sides of us rise up again and again. Fear. Anger. Destruction. Those who had always seemed odd and alien, dumber or weaker in comparison were more than often cast out from society.

She was part of the outcast group. She was cast away along with her brother into the outskirts of society. Society refused to acknowledge them.

Enna and Angelo were cast out for one simple thing: their wings. Their stupid, beautiful wings. Everyone in their blind little village hated those wings, hated how they made their owners seem superior to the villagers somehow. They cast a glow of beauty around them, a sense of peace that the villagers hated. The villagers hated how they had the wings that the villagers themselves could not have.

And so they were shoved away from sight. Shoved away so the villagers could make themselves feel somehow stronger, better than them. Everywhere they went in the village, whether it was to snatch some food or to drop in on the latest news, they were welcomed by cold glares and stony silence.

Enna hated it. She longed to hate the villagers for doing this to her, to her brother. But Angelo refused to hate the villagers. He comforted her, telling her that they shunned what they did not understand, that one day, they would open their eyes.

He was, unfortunantly, dead wrong. As the years flew by, the silent treatments soon turned into harsh tauntings, into ridicule and scorn. Whenever Enna entered the village alone, she was met with rocks and sharp words, telling the 'freak' to leave. She soon loathed, and feared, going into the village alone. But she restrained her hate. She restrained her hate for the sake of her brother.

All that changed. It all changed for the better...or for the worst.

.::*::.


It began on a rainy day. A cold, dreary day that one would have to plunge through and hope for the best. Enna was returning from a nearby market with groceries when the kids came. The Sahound had watched them with her huge eyes, waiting for the torment to start, as she knew from all too many years of experience.

A single word floated through the drumming rain, hammering itself firmly into Enna's brain: "Freak."

It was a turn-on for the other kids. They circled her, chanting over and over again that dreadful word. No matter how many times she heard it, Enna knew she would never become used to it. The Sahound kept her head low as she tried to leave. The kids pushed her back.

"You don't belong here at all," One of them hissed. "Why don't you use those wings of yours and fly away?" He shoved her into the mud. The basket she had been carrying in her mouth went flying. Fruits and vegetables rolled across the muddy ground. The swarm of kids burst into laughter and Enna longed to attack them, to scream at them, to let out all her pent-up anger.

Nothing came out. She slowly reached for the basket, but the boy snatched it away. "You little freak! You want it so bad? Go and get it!" With all his brutish strength, he tossed it up a nearby tree. The mocking, hollow laughter almost brought the hot, angry tears to Enna's eyes. The Sahound forcibly restrained them, telling herself that she would not show weakness. She drew herself up, head held high as she carefully tried to manuver around the boy. He blocked her way.

"You've been stealing so much from our plates!" The boy sneered. "I don't see why my Pops thinks it's worth it to even let you breathe on our food!"

"Move." Enna dully answered. More laughter.

"'Move'," The boy mimicked her. "Do you think we'll let you run off? You aren't getting off so easily, freak." The circle closed in. A spark of fear ignited in Enna. Would they really hurt her?

"Back off," A new voice cut through the air, full of confidence and authority. "It's not right to bully someone like that."

The children's attention was suddenly focused on a small Autumn Kuhna who stood boldly defiant in front of them. The boy surveyed the Kuhna with obvious disdain and spat, "Well, Kytari, I'd watch your mouth if I were you. You might be the mayor's pet, but it doesn't protect you from everything."

Kytari looked at Enna with an odd emotion carved in his eyes. The Sahound realized with a jolt that it was pity. "I know that. But I wouldn't do that, Mark. It's just wrong."

"Wrong? She's a freak, along with her freaky brother. They both deserve to get beaten up!" His voice raised, and he took a threatening step toward the Kuhna. Kytari stood firm, a fierce scowl on his face.

It was then that Enna ran.

She half-stumbled, half-sprinted down the muddy path, her thoughts focused on reaching the safe harbor of her home, away from this torment, this living hell.

When Enna arrived, however, she felt sharp disappointment rise in her. The Kuhna...Kytari...had been kind enough to defend her. Yet she didn't thank him...

The Sahound looked back at the small village and shivered. She had to put it aside. Put it all aside...

"Enna?" Angelo came out, an aura of joy around him. "I have great news, Enna!" He barely seemed to notice the mud caked around her fur as he continued. "I've found a home for us, Enna, a real home!"

The news was unbelievable. Enna stared at Angelo, a look of disbelief in her face. The horrid event that had happened earlier shed away, replaced by pure happiness. "Angelo...really? You found a home for us?" She excitedly asked.

"Yes," Angelo answered, a huge grin on his face. "We have an owner now, Enna, and a real home."

It was like a dream come true. Somebody who would actually care for them, who would love them had finally come, it seemed. As the two siblings embraced, they would never imagine the troubles that lurked ahead...

.::*::.


UNFINISHED
[I just had to put this here. Otherwise, I'll forget >3>;;]




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I'm just waiting 'til I die
Never dreamed a single dream so kind in my entire life
No one knew, even cared for this fleeting fairy tail
Then it slipped into seething sun and soon it sailed away...


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Postby Kestrel » 05/06/2008 6:30 PM

I'll try!
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Postby SweetDisaster » 05/06/2008 6:31 PM

I did it...*collapses and pokes her now-giant post*
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Postby Kestrel » 05/07/2008 4:55 PM

Name: Matador ('Killler' in Brazilian Portugese)

Personality: Kind and cheerful, Matador is an obedient and loving companion. Eager to please, she'll try to do everything in her power to fulfill her master's (or mistress's) wishes. She is determinded to do her best at anything, and will never break a promise, unless she's forced to.

Story: Matador was raised with her brother, Angelo, alongside her. They were never apart, and vowed never to separate. But, of course, as pups, they never thought this was a bad idea. It hurt them more than they could imagine.

Since puphood, Matador was trained for hours on techniques to efficiantly assainsinate a Kuhna. Almost every waking moment she was in the training arena, with Kuhnas and Kuhna kits to practice on. Time and time again, she was sent out to kill a Kuhna. Unfortunately, when ever she went out to assainsinate a Kuhna, Angelo could never go with her. The ties of their vow distracted her, and in a way, 'binded' her to her brother. Time and time again, she failed the mission. Finally, her owner lost his patience. He drove Matador and her brother away, as he was having the same problem, and left them to fend for themselves.

After wandering a while, they met Fire. She took them in, and they lived a comfortable life - far away from the Kuhnas, as their training never was completely erased. Angelo unlearned this 'talent', but Matador never did. It was harder for her then for her brother, as she gave her whole self to her training. Angelo never felt that it was right for him, but she hung on the every word of her trainer, trying to become the best Kuhna killer ever.

Matador one day strayed way too near the Kuhna Pen. She was refreshing her memory of Kuhnas, as it had been years ago that Fire kindly adopted Angelo and herself. That fateful day, she laid eyes on an Autumn Kuhna, Kytari. Every single day, she returned to stare at Kytari. Unexperienced in the ways of crushes, her explained the situation to Angelo. He confirmed the one piece of information that would change her life forever - or... a least for a little while - she had a crush on a Kuhna. Out of all the things she could like, it had to be a Kuhna, the very thing that she had been taught since puphood to kill.

Mortified that she would harm - or even kill - Kytari, Matador vowed to never see him again. This was much easier said then done. Every day, some part of her yearned to feast her eyes upon him. Matador also knew that, being a Kuhna, he would one day find a lifemate, most likely, - which would not be her. She couldn't bear to thing that Kytari would never know about her, never know what she felt, and would instead find a lifemate in a Kuhna. Every time he left the Kuhna Pen, everytime he ventured near the border between her Pen and the Kuhna's, she could barely restrain running up in front of him. She was too afraid he'd die under her vengeful paws. And after all these years, she couldn't unlearn how to kill a Kuhna. The very information had become part of her, in a way.

So now she sits remorsefully, never talking to anyone but her brother, her very soul attached to his and Kytari's. She couldn't be with her brother and Kytari at the same time, she couldn't be with Kytari without the risk of killing him, and she couldn't be without Kytari and be happy at the same time. She now has resolved to waste away with her beloved brother, Angleo, but without her beloved Autumn Kuhna, Kytari...
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Postby AmberGlaze » 05/10/2008 6:29 PM

I'll give it a shot! *wants Lucain pup*
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Postby Toon-Souseiseki » 05/14/2008 8:28 PM

Puppy!!!  Me wants one.  i have the name, but the story and personality will be posted next.  Got an idea for the story.  It'll take a while to type on...  But oh well.  Count me IN!!!!

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Name: Penombra (( Italian for Twilightwon't tell ))
Personality: Penombra was a sweet little girl, until Angelo made her forceably told her to kill every single kuhna.  But that was a problem, she was in love with an Autum kuhna named Kytari.  Now she'll have to stop this herself for the sake of Kytari's life.

Story: one sec...
The heart wants what the Heart GRIEVES FOR
And that's the TRUTH
Though it may hurt, I give what they DESIRE
What they Desire is my own IMITATION
The reality is, my mind thinks FICTION

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Postby SpringsSong » 05/22/2008 10:26 AM

Entrants updated.  You'se guys've gots a week~

EDIT: Make that until 9 o'clock PM forum time tomorrow~  I needs ta be seein' entries or I might just have to extend this~
Maybe I'm foolish, maybe I'm blind
Thinking I can see through this to see what's behind
Got no way to prove it, so maybe I'm lying
Take a look in the mirror, what do you see
Can you see it clearer, or are you deceived in what you believe?
Don't ask my opinion, don't ask me to lie
Then beg for forgiveness for making you cry
'cause I'm no prophet or Messiah
You should go looking somewhere higher

I'm only human, I make mistakes
I'm only human, I do what I can
I'm only human, that's all it takes to put the blame on me

Don't put the blame on me

"Human", Rag'n'Bone Man

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