by rayquaza7996 » 04/22/2009 4:57 PM
((OOC post at the bottom, read it, Mega.))
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Nightmarefall sighed. "No worry about me sleeping. I can't sleep without certain drugs." Boundfall sighed back.
<Tell them I don't need to sleep more then maybe an hour.>
"Boundfall says she only needs about an hour of sleep, herself."
(3 sentances, Mega. And could you please use quotation marks ("") around what they're saying? It should be-
"Well,I guess if we have to keep moving,Slash is going to have to wait till we get to where we are going."
Slash yawned. "Well let's get," he paused, yawning again, "moving." Slash looked especially dreary,but like the trooper he was, he kept moving.
"I'm not tired at all, Slash is really active,so he has to sleep a lot to stay energized. Hey Cell,why did you trip Nightmare?"
I don't expect it to be perfect, but please the quotation marks)
You've been known to obsess over the future,Do you think you'll get away from the past?As you starve yourself just to make it through to midnight,Consider what you might have found.You think you've got a good thing now?Ludo - Topeka.:Pen:. .:Clickables:. .:Wishlist:. .:Journal:. .:Characters:.